Many people against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures
Dolphin is known as one of the most intelligent animals; hence, they are trained for entertainment in the circus. This leads to many objections because people aware that these animals can be injured. I totally agree with this idea.
As we can see, dolphin is a common way to amuse people, especially children in the circus. It means that they have been interned since they were small or was born even to train instead of living in oceans freely. These animals have to stand savage training program for a long time. This is the main reason cause the decrease in fertility, health and age of dolphins. Besides, in narrow pools, the water environment is polluted where bad bacteria and virus can maintain makes dolphins infect intestinal and venereal diseases and also death.
Secondly, the dolphin is in danger of extinction. According to a research of Dolphins-world, the most considerable threat to dolphin’s death come from human’ demands. It also points out that 95% deaths of dolphins during the 10-years recently was caused by human. There is a growing body of evidence that people harm them by many ways such as poor captivity, illegal transport and capture…
Last but not least, Dolphins shouldn’t be caged in a circus because they deserve to live free and they need to live free. Dolphins are very active animals, so they need to be free in the big ocean where they belong, not in some small circus tank. Furthermore, living with human for too long makes dolphins lose their wild instinct. If we release them back in the ocean one day, they may never get used to the ocean habitat and die.
In conclusion, I believe that if you love something, set it free, and dolphins are our friends, so instead of forcing them to become circus clowns, let them swim free in their ocean and help us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: research
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Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79552715655 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57130745803 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1219326498 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232198202127 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721649956011 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498999540031 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128738849076 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505735357494 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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