Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.
It is believed that international travel has some negative effects on the host country. Some explanations for this belief will be put forward and some possible measures will be drown to change this attitude.
There are two significant reasons why many people think that international tourism is a bad thing. Firstly, is has negative influence on the environment of the host country. The waste disposal and pollution from foreign tourists are the main factors that damage the air, soil and water condition of the host. For example, Do Son beach in Vietnam became full of garbarge after the foreign tourists leave. Secondly, foreigners usually do not understand and respect the traditions and customs of the host country so they might have inappropiate behaviors. This may lead to misunderstand of the locals. For example, many foreingers wear short skirts when visiting pagodas and temples in Vietnam, which is unacceptable so that it might make bad image of the foreiners to the locals.
However, some measures could be implemented to change the negative attitude of the local people about international tourism. The first solution is that the benefits of international travel should be informed to the residents of the host country. International tourism brings countless opportunities to develop the economy of the host country as well as creates more jobs for the people living in the tourist trap. The second solution is that the authorities and the government should have policies to limit the amount of garbarge coming from the foreigners. For example, the campains of collecting rubbish on the beach should be held with the participation of foreign visitors. In addition, international tourists must be provided information about traditions and customs of their destination through travel bronchure to help them understand and have right behaviors.
In conclusion, the negative thought of international tourism is caused by many reasons and some solutions should be implemented to change this thounght
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Son) must be used with a third-person verb: 'beaches'.
Suggestion: beaches
...dition of the host. For example, Do Son beach in Vietnam became full of garbarge afte...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd respect the traditions and customs of the host country so they might have inap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34700315457 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95063492402 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511041009464 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5449210114 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331752501147 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11004074994 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104633768133 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207501409549 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506873143972 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.