Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Hitherto, globalization has led to the sea/enormous/grandiose disparity in city and countryside living patterns. Although the rural or urban areas bring the merits for human health, I gravitate more toward the former by giving some rational evidence.
It is conspicuous that although the city offers more modern facilities, the health issues reach the number at most. Regarding the public amenities serving human exercises, the city government allocates a huge budget to build distinct types of working-out equipment in open parks with the aim to encourage citizens to frequently stretch out their bodies. Therefore, people from various walks of life uniformly have access to these facilities, which strengthen the whole community’s health. By contrast, there is a new depicting that the backbone diseases rate in the cosmopolitan city is outweighed those in suburb zones, this is the aftermath of office working. Notwithstanding the local government’s positive actions in improving residents’ health, employees are likely to be occupied with loads of work and tons of deadlines. Hence, paperwork requires officers to sit in one place for several consecutive hours so that almost all staffs’ backbone is fiercely deteriorated and changes the shape.
On the other hand, I express my strong support for a better lifestyle in suburbs. A fixed mindset of the multitudes distortedly advocates with the statement that the countryside with the lack of artificial technologies causes infinite inconvenience for human life; however, the reverse was true. People have more open space in the suburbs so that they can enjoy doing outside activities like farming or folklore games which can extremely good for their physical health. In addition, the severe impacts of high-tech devices on users’ brains and eyes are perceptible; therefore, people residing in villages report a lower rate of catching eye strains or brain disorders. Furthermore, the number of vehicles in the countryside is not as many as in a city, so the atmosphere here is far cleaner, creating a sense of relaxation for people and deterring them from respiratory diseases. Scientists in Vietnam made a survey a few years ago about the lifespan of two groups of people who live in two disparate countryside and city zones, the result is that the longevity of those living in urban areas seems to be 10 years higher than that of city people. This strongly proves the importance of the suburbs to people’s quality lives.
All things considered, living in the city have its own perks but it is better to have a lifestyle in the countryside.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27644230769 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04512471537 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8011822192 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1875 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197329734956 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606000936556 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421519308752 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128615761333 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339859036919 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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