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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.

What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

No one doubts that leading healthy life is a blessing. So, it's essential to maintain healthy diets for keeping people sound physically and mentally, but often they can not properly maintain healthy diet in everyday lives. The main reasons of having unhealthy grains might be habit and busy lifestyles, while it is found that restrictions and regulations on restaurants and workplace could be the possible solutions to eradicate these problems.

On one hand, millions of people are consuming unhealthy cereals because they are habituated to these foods. Firstly, native people of a region or nation are unwilling to eat healthy foods even if the native or local grains are harmful to them, resulting serious health disorders such as obesity, blood pressure etc. Secondly, some personals especially children and teenagers enjoy having junk food while they are at schools, colleges or universities. For instance, Md. Omar Faruk, a professor of University of Lahore, conducted a survey in 2016 and found that 76.21% of university students ate their lunch outside of the home, resulting stomach related diseases. That's why it can be said that people can not maintain healthy diet because of their habits.

Additionally, busy livestyles often force people leave healthy diets. First of all, when people especially employees are dedicated to their jobs, they get limited amount of time to took healthy food, resulting the consumption of junk food at restaurants. Moreover, entertainment industry has been rapidly rising and creating tremendous advertisements for food companies, which offer unhealthy food items for consumers, driving people away from accepting healthy diet. For example, McDonald, one of the well known franchise, often promotes its foods on television commercials, encouraging people to have their meals. Hence, it can be stated that busy lifestyles result driving people towards unhealthy food.

On the other hand, the possible solutions could be setting up restrictions and regulations to reduce the problems. Firstly, restrictions must be imposed on restaurants regarding their food offerings; encouraging customers to have healthy and balanced food at restaurants could be effective. Besides, increasing the price of grains at restaurants may be proved successful to resolve these problems, because customers get demotivated when they find consumable products unaffordable. For example, imposing Value Added Tax(VAT) is an memorizing idea to do so. Another possible solution might be limiting the working hours at workplaces that are physically demanding.

In conclusion, maintaining balanced foods is sometimes troublesome because of the habits of people and busy lifestyles, but imposing regulations and restrictions on restaurants and companies can be effective to litigate these problems.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64858490566 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94557154589 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544811320755 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7469476402 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.052631579 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.68421052632 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222127977654 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776054941059 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573868799825 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143929516521 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548719640839 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments