Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Many things contribute to make a person successful and as many people think, region is one of the many contributor. There are other factors like one’s motivation, hard work, capability, determination etc.
Native region has varied effect on its population depending upon whether it is an urban city or rural. People are bound to follow things which they see in their surroundings. People living in an urban city has more chance to excel in life as the city provides better opportunity, environment and people to look forward to as compared to rural city. For example, cricketers in Indian Cricket team are majorly from metro cities, one person influence others to strive hard and achieve success. While on the other hand in rural areas there is no such environment and opportunities, people major goal is to earn their daily bread. Hence native region influence and person influence are complimentary to each other.
While there are several instances where people from rural background has excelled in different parts of life for example Dhiru Bhai Ambani started Reliance Industries being from a poor background, even our Prime Minister Narendra Modi belonged to rural areas of Gujarat and worked hard to climb the ladder of politics.
Thus native region and person influence on each other is a factor to success but one’s hard work, determination is what makes a person really successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun contributor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many contributors'.
Suggestion: many contributors
...many people think, region is one of the many contributor. There are other factors like one apos;...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ajor goal is to earn their daily bread. Hence native region influence and person infl...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ard to climb the ladder of politics. Thus native region and person influence on e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13913043478 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68861634396 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3851615714 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288343358772 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127798498616 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119026057324 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185411995471 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910709089766 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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