THE MEDIA SHOULD INCLUDE MORE STORIES WHICH REPORT GOOD NEWS. WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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THE MEDIA SHOULD INCLUDE MORE STORIES WHICH REPORT GOOD NEWS. WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In the modern life, the media is popular over the world, but there are much bad news outweighs good news. It is said that people had better increase more posts of the good news in the advanced technology. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, media include a lot of negative news nowadays. Firstly, bad news has a terrible effect on viewers, especially youth. The young who have wide curiosity would imitate some damaging act in news like robber or burglar because they do not know that this act is really dangerous and doing it would ruin their future. Therefore, the number of criminals would be picked up. Secondly, reading much bad news makes people become insensible, they think that the atrocious things are the fact and they do not need to find out solutions to the problems happening now.
On the order hand, I strongly believe that the media should have more stories about the good news. The most important reason that good news helps individuals feel more optimistic, they have the good faith in the future so they would try to improve their lives and make life become better. For example, when residents do something good like growing tree or cleaning up the garbage at the beach and it is inserted in the media, they would get a range of compliments and some presents by the viewers, so they feel happy and have motives to do more admirable deeds. Moreover, the wonderful deeds which post in media make readers admire the person doing that and feel motivated to do the same.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I strongly agree that the media should include more articles about good news.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73519163763 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31448599372 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6255486511 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329328610287 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127998295698 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869596868291 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225374365211 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643369825345 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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