Essay topics:
Media topic
Today, I would like to focus on media topic. I was just reading a breaking news before I ate my breakfast. I usually up to the minutes for newspaper which many stale news.
I though that many editorial police have not seen good views. Therefore, they have been falling circulation which they sold each day. Maybe, they need a celebrity endorsement for their journal, news and advertising. I realized that they focused on sensational journalism too much which did not help building brand on top.
P/s: Thank you for your help.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'breaking news'.
Suggestion: breaking news
...ocus on media topic. I was just reading a breaking news before I ate my breakfast. I usually up...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stale news', 'a good deal of stale news'.
Suggestion: much stale news; a good deal of stale news
...y up to the minutes for newspaper which many stale news. I though that many editorial police ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for newspaper which many stale news. I though that many editorial police have ...
^
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
... journalism too much which did not help building brand on top. P/s: Thank you for you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 439.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 91.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82417582418 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08859061939 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57349405165 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.769230769231 0.561755894193 137% => OK
syllable_count: 130.5 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3892496362 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.875 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.375 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959343055875 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561795520655 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148637123532 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670648918616 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948440796298 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.49 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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