Modern lifestyle is completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that the changes have been very positive while some others believe they have negative. Which point of view do you agree with? Why?
It is said that modern lifestyle is completely different from the way people lived in the past.
Some believe it changed for the worse. Nowadays, people seem to work for a longer time per day than they used to in the past, and the busier they become, the less time they spend for their families, which rarely happened in the past. The ratio of suicide of young people has increased in the past few years, especially in Korea and Japan, where people have to work usually in high pressure. Besides, thanking to the development of information technology, you can easily find kids with smart phones on t...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: usually work
...n Korea and Japan, where people have to work usually in high pressure. Besides, thanking to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54578754579 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37669949843 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9593277874 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269530643436 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101134112983 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116752103083 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225059862111 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116619754574 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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