Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is true that with the rapid development of modern technology, people have a good chance to gain valuable information and exchange database freely all the time. Despite benefits, some people believe that it is harmful and detrimental to our communities. I totally disagree with the idea that the advantages and threat of technology outweigh the advancement it brought for us.
On the one hand, it is undeniable the modern technology has an important role to play in many aspects of our lives especially it makes a great contribution to search for a wide range of information. Firstly, the easy access to information system gives countless benefits to the students who take majority of time in collecting the database from various sources of information. For example, millions of students are able to access the internet in anywhere instead of going to the library. Secondly, with advances in modern technology sharing information became much easier than before. For instance, if students would have a conversation with other people. In the past, they have to travel or have to exchange via written letters but with video conferencing which is the outcome of the digital revolution enable people to exchange ideas without traveling.
On the other hand, there are powerful reasons why some people consider that the development of technology has a negative impact on out society. First reason that it is dangerous as it could be misused for any crime activities. One disadvantage of computers is that computer hackers may be able to discover your personal details such as bank account information. Second reason that children who spend too much time in front of screen computer are getting addicted to the online game. As a result, young people are isolated by a community and are less likely to encourage real interaction.
In conclusion, I would agree that limited access and share information have some advantages for our lives but we should never forget that it has many disadvantages as well. I personally believe that government should introduce and adopt policies strictly about it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1642228739 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86208295142 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0825320433 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149315650714 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435201989729 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317367218905 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837674844702 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264171596356 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.