the money spent by government on space program should be better spent on vital public service schools and hospital to what extent do you agree or disagree?
The chart blow show the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012
Authorities, spend huge amount on space travel programs, On the contrary, these amount of cost used on public places as well as schools and hospitals. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement.
To commence with, there are several reason to waste this money. Firstly, government organised these kind of programs which are extremely expensive, due to fact that, in this event also scientist as well as staff involved. Apart from that, programme related equipments also needed. One of the main fact that,these type of programms are not beneficial for ordinary individuals and do not help them. It is only a process, which related to waste of huge amount of money. Among this, government should be abundant this kind of programmes.
On the other hand, lawmakers should be spend money to rebuild as well as rebuilding to the public places like schools, temples as well as hospitals. Due to fact that, these places are mostly used by every alternatives, according to their requirements.kaun si pencil e government should be used a large amount of caused these types of services which are beneficial for people as well as human being. For example, we all use schools, hospitals as well as temples along with the road in everyday our life. If these places are not in good condition that individuals faced several types of problems. Moreover, those who do job for government they also improve respect in society. It is continuous like this, ordinary individual also stand below in poverty line as well as not given a better quality of life.
To recapitulate, I believe that it is totally waste of money and government also should be abundant as well as this money used for good purposes and developments.
The given line graph illustrate, the information about the percentage of unemployment rate of rural or urban areas during time period of 2012 in Australia.
The data is calibrated in percentage.
First, implementation rate in rural area situated at approximately 7% in first quarter of the year. Then it declined at above 4% in the second quarter of the year. After that it rose again in third quarter and this one time again declined at 5%. Lastly, this roseview are then situated at 5% in fourth quarter. In this process showed a few fluctuation in the end of period.
On the other hand, amount of unemployment in urban area firstly situated near by 2% in first quarter as well as as it increased as 4% then it again around 2% in third quarter. again it throws in the end of time at near by 5% in the fourth quarter of the year in Australia.
Overall, the percentage of unemployment rate of rural areas showed the downward trend while implementation rate of urban areas showed the upward trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...atement. To commence with, there are several reason to waste this money. Firstly, governmen...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...is money. Firstly, government organised these kind of programs which are extremely expensi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...s also needed. One of the main fact that,these type of programms are not beneficial fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
... On the other hand, lawmakers should be spend money to rebuild as well as rebuilding ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... well as temples along with the road in everyday our life. If these places are not in go...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ong with the road in everyday our life. If these places are not in good condition ...
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Suggestion:
... percentage. First, implementation rate in rural area situated at approximately ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fluctuation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few fluctuations'.
Suggestion: few fluctuations
...ourth quarter. In this process showed a few fluctuation in the end of period. On the other han...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ployment in urban area firstly situated near by 2% in first quarter as well as as it in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...ted near by 2% in first quarter as well as as it increased as 4% then it again around...
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Suggestion: Again
...en it again around 2% in third quarter. again it throws in the end of time at near by...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
.... again it throws in the end of time at near by 5% in the fourth quarter of the year in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mployment rate of rural areas showed the downward trend while implementation rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, while, apart from, for example, in fact, kind of, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88336933045 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81241351423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455723542117 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6491691773 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.44 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.52 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168270683699 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446873537237 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293536662414 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689912338311 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308022651101 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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