Throughout history, people have always been looking for a better look. Accordingly, people spend lots of money to buy items from famous brands, which are mainly due to advertising and modern lifestyle.
Prior to all, brands companies spending an enormous amount of money on advertising their products on TV or social media in order to attract customers. For example, brands like Dior or Chanel hire beautiful and international models to advertise their new collection of shoes, dresses, watches or makeup cosmetics on billboards or TV, so that everyone fascinated by the model's appearance and wants to buy those items from the famous brands.
Apart from the brand's publicity, the development of technology and cities could be a leading factor in changing people's lifestyles. Many individuals unwillingly have to buy new and modern items because they need this item for their business or their social image, also the other wants to have high quality and fashionable things. For instance, many occupations like lawyers, engineers or designers need to look professional in their office so they decorate their workplace with furniture, computers, paintings or sculptures from well-known brands to impress their clients and customers.
Although this phenomenon could have negative impacts on society like the consumption of products or promote luxury, from my point of view there are more advantageous on this topic. Obviously, many human achievements and create job opportunities and improve the economic situation have been due to the high demand for products from society. As an illustration, people love to have new technology like smartphones, cars or gadgets so that companies work hard every day to invent new material or techniques to build new merchandise and this could change feature life, also it provides Jobs for young people which want to start their careers or businesses.
In conclusion, advertisements, and changes in people’s shop's habits are the most reasons for buying luxe items among individuals, and this can have negative or positive effects on people’s lives in many ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'models'' or 'model's'?
Suggestion: models'; model's
... TV, so that everyone fascinated by the models appearance and wants to buy those items...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brands'' or 'brand's'?
Suggestion: brands'; brand's
...om the famous brands. Apart from the brands publicity, the development of technolog...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to impress their clients and customers. Although this phenomenon could have nega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92033810639 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8614922484 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.545454545 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184324216218 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701325900981 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536667110271 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108539810992 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334882878731 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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