More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, with economic development, a lot of people around the world gain a better income and living standards have become more and more growth, as the result, their demand for the outfit, transport means, accommodations, are higher and higher. So that the trend of buying well-known brands has been very popular. This essay will prove and analyze this trend.
There are several reasons to believe that many people are addicted to reputable labels. Firstly, buying the famous items was existed and develop in the past. For example, the King and royal family in Vietnam used only the things which had been chosen extremely carefully and had the best qualification, especially from well-known brand such as Ha Dong Silk, Bat Trang Ceramic,…Secondly, because a successful product advertisement of these companies, their product can have a great reputation and approach with a lot of people. Follow that, it will become global brands such as Nike, Honda, KFC, ….Thirdly, it derives the desire of humans to possess. They want to show off, improve their value or just jump for joy.
Everything has two sides and this issue also has its advantages and disadvantages. First and foremost, not only people can buy the best qualification products but also it affects the growth of the economy like promote production and consumption, improve the product’s qualification and appearance. This is the reason why the American economy is the biggest cause a lot of famous titles such as Adidas, Apple, Nike …supply billions of dollars every year. Apart from this, however, it seems that people are spending too much money on these items when the poverty still expand around the world. Some people buy plenty of famous clothes but they do not wear this twice, as a consequence, this causes a huge waste while there are millions of people in Africa do not have any clothes. For further, both the unfairness and the distance between the rich and poor ones are more and more wider.
To sum up, I have to confess that buying famous clothes, cars, and other items is popular but when spending a lot of money on this is not essential. Whereas without these global brands, the economy of some countries will have a crisis and there is no development of any production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9709762533 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71463569232 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.158698702 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21464366844 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661867223141 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510987010866 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123465551395 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282618151036 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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