More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items.
What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In modern life, some people argue that humans are more likely to purchase numerous top-notch brands for their clothes, vehicles and distinct other products. I, personally, reckon that the statement has both beneficial and detrimental for the development and my essay will address this premise and provide several reasons why customers want to buy these items.
To begin with, there are a myriad of compelling reasons for people to purchase luxury brands. First of all, these products produced by some popular brands such as Gucci, Louis Vuiton, Lamborghini and so on which have a high position in the manufacturing industry, are good in quality and a perfect aesthetic inasmuch as it is created by professionals in many parts of the world. Furthermore, the duration when someone utilises it is more than other kinds of products from other local brands. With expensive cost, it is able to ensure durability over the time. Last but not least, these items from popular companies warranted more prestige than other places. Now that almost all the luxury firms provide their customers an assurance about their products; buyers, therefore, are reliable when buying products.
On the other hand, besides numerous positive aspects, buying famous brands has also negative impacts in the development. In terms of the advantages, the more and more people purchase products from top-notch brands give rise to the reality that the wealth of humans is increasing and can afford expensive items. Furthermore, the number of buyers purchasing the products leads to the competitive profit from selling them of many brands. When it comes to the disadvantages, a myriad of people who want to boast their wealth have a tendency to show off their expensive outfits and cars. Therefore, much more products are bought in prodigality.
To sum up, customers should consider purchasing luxury products to become wise buyers because it has both benefits and drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67349194343 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0872944154 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25497917202 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849480611366 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668400876537 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140026349349 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847418751182 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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