Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Current environmental issues have a substantial impact on all living creatures including human beings. However, there is a disappointing fact that a large group of popularity may seem to ignore this important topic. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on this phenomenon and show why many people appear to neglect it.
First of all, problems in the environment do not directly affect people on a daily basis. Governments in many countries care about the degradation of the infrastructure and skyscrapers construction, but little concern of environment such as global warming. The reason for this is that global warming or water pollution is a gradual process and they do not influence the whole nation as well. As a result, people just pay much attention to their economic information and ignore protecting the surrounding environment.
Secondly, another contributing factor is the irresponsibility of governments and mass media. If the government has a detailed announcement regarding preserving the environment surrounding us and takes that into force, citizens definitely follow up and create a good habit in the long term. People tend to care about the issues posted by social media, then they will discuss, take those topics into great consideration. Take an example, in Vietnam, people prefer to use Facebook as a tool to access information, they can comment their feelings under that post and share them with friends or relatives. Consequently, through mass media, we can raise people's awareness about environmental problems faster and more effectively.
In conclusion, it can be denied that nowadays an increasing number of citizens pay little or no awareness to serious environmental issues. It is essential that governments should take major steps in solving the issues and educate people about the value of the matter in order to have a bright future for all human kinds.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27574750831 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09071179836 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5681609352 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193373589693 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613250624423 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455616758092 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108614555543 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042162933723 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.