The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken the solve these problems?
It is an indisputable fact that people relocate from rural areas to towns which will lead to severe troubles in both places. This essay will take a close look at these problems and suggest some effective solutions.
There are various obstacles stemming from this relocation. First, when people left agricultural areas to search for better chances in cities, as a result, urban population will be overcrowded. This engenders traffic congestions on every street, an unceasing increase in vehicles emitting a large amount of exhaust fumes, resulting in air pollution. Moreover, highly competitive demands in job market among a great deal of candidates would be detrimental for all citizens due to raising unemployment rate or even slashing crime incidence. Second, rural livings are also on the decline. The growth of agricultural areas would be more and more sluggish while people moving to citites are not willing to return because they find it difficulties in building their career path. Consequently, the large estate remains desolate and rural people might even live below a poverty line.
Hence, a number of helpful measures are imposed to solve the challenging problems. From the government’s prospective, they should invest more in modern infrastructures construction which draws worker’s attention in rural areas. For examples, improved traffic transports and good quality of public services might ensure better lives of employees and motivate them to concentrate on their works. Furthermore, employment agencies should orient ungraduated students to look for job opportunities in the hometown instead of reposition to cities. Finally, each individual should raise their awareness of the development of the whole community and have contribution to their homeland regardless of its location.
In conclusion, while people move from agricultural region to cities, they bring numerous disadvantages to both areas, which need to be resolved by valuable measures to some extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'infrastructures'' or 'infrastructure's'?
Suggestion: infrastructures'; infrastructure's
...tive, they should invest more in modern infrastructures construction which draws worker's ...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by valuable measures to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60264900662 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04695502348 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5687483932 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150377605127 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453419866929 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454882057748 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100522384164 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505958910782 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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