Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In the recent years, it has become a popular trend to open multinational businesses in the rising nations. This has both pros and cons. This essay is going to explain both positive and negative impacts of it.
While looking at the advantages of starting new multinational companies in the growing countries, the first and foremost is the improvement in the unemployment rate. More factories mean more job opportunities. It leads to decrease in the poverty and raises the living standard of people. Secondly, increasing number of companies by developed countries bring more money to the undeveloped countries in the form of tax as one nation has to pay tax to open an office in another nation which helps to raise the economy. For example, in the past, Japan and China had opened car companies in India which have declined unemployed individuals in India.
However, there are some disadvantages of running multinational businesses in the undeveloped countries in which the most important is the exploitation of the labor. These companies pay very less wages to the employees of home countries as compared to employees of the developed countries. Apart from this, these businesses buy raw material from these developing countries at a very cheap price which can be sold oversea at a higher value. All these factors have effect on the economy of rising countries. Moreover, multinational companies cause production of waste material which is not managed and decomposed properly. It results in various type of pollution in the growing countries.
In conclusion, I think multinational companies are both boon and bane at the same time by lowering the unemployment burden, by exploiting the laborers and causing pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26821192053 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.162251655629 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0860927152318 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0298013245033 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0165562913907 0.0437548338989 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135761589404 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0695364238411 0.0403226058552 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.01993273836 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298013245033 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132450331126 0.0861772015684 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00331125827815 0.021408717616 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0165562913907 0.011925033212 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1724.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2238267148 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368231046931 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306859205776 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241877256318 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184115523466 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01993273836 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.2440758543 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4666666667 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8662541238 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.1525872443 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.26984126984 1.69124875643 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422094759512 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106455525157 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732666663295 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55051424647 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192281826096 0.148594505496 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163800630769 0.134430193775 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852334027881 0.0742795772207 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380561502907 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121307671558 0.0638462369009 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2768525883 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629921172512 0.058150111329 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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