Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team. what do u think what are the cause of this? how can it be resolved?
The technology today in the world is emerging at a very high speed, this in turn is a sign of progress and development of the society.Although many people get lot of employment opportunities with this, Yet the point of argument is freshers who had completed their education and joined the company lack in interpersonal skills that effect the company's margin. this essay will discuss about various causes of this problem and also try to give few possible solutions.
Firstly, due to the fast growing software industry there are plenty of jobs available in the open sector and eventually there is a plethora of competition. As the interviews conducted by these firms are based on the subjects that are taught in their colleges most of the students get prepared and trained on these skills.
Indeed there will be a drawback in learning about the other development skills. In addition to this, the education provided at the universities has become more mechanical where they are only concerned about the students to get placed in good companies and will only providing training to the students just to improve their academic knowledge. One of my friend was trying to get job in a company and as per the requirements of the company he got his coaching done and luckily he got selected for the job but later he failed because it was very difficult for him to cope up everyone and understand their style of working.
On the other hand, to overcome this problem the colleges and the universities should come up with a variety of the academic schedule where the student will be trained not only on the subject but also communication skills and other inter-personal skills can be developed. And also the companies should provide them atleast a week of training regarding the norms and how the work is being done.
In conclusion I feel that both the educational institutions and the companies should focus on this problem and should try there best to overcome this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90447761194 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78085937827 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1612441879 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.3 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174429202595 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678312950561 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478600890293 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964278085257 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574786960537 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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