Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?
The past few decades have witnessed an increase in the crime rate, particularly among adolescents. It is time we analyzed the root causes of this problem and outline some feasible solutions to it.
The most frequent cause of this phenomenon is the lack of care from family. Nowadays, it is obvious that adults spend much more time on financial concerns, especially earning money. Therefore, the amount of time they spend on their children will decline day by day. As a result, this leads to the misunderstanding between children and adults which stems from the fact that parents do not understand children’s feelings as well as their thoughts. In addition, parents are not able to control activities which children participate in. Consequently, youngsters easily fall into criminal ways. In fact, according to a report from the Children’s Commissioner in England, there were 27,000 children who considered themselves to be a member of a street gang. When being interviewed, they said that they had had serious arguments with their parents because of different opinions about some fields. Hence, the shortage of parental care is the main reason for this problem.
Having identified the root of the problem, a good remedy to cope with this situation is that parents must take children’s feelings into consideration. Adults should spend more time sharing their personal attitudes with children as well as join in some activities with them to improve their belief. In addition, they also need to monitor children and teach them how to identify the wrong thing from the right. This is shown by the following examples. A 14-year-old boy who was born in a wealthy family had an intention to join in a street gang with his friends. However, his father did not know about that, he had never cared about his son’s thoughts. Fortunately, his mother realized some unusual problems in his opinion. Subsequently, she decided to put her work aside and started spending more time making personal conversations as well as taking part in a sports match with him. Eventually, she brought her son back to the right lifestyle. Obviously, to tackle this problem, parents should take actions to prevent the crime rate from continuing to go up.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding the growth of crimes, yet, they can be solved according to measures I listed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11053984576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81560602258 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580976863753 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7122916587 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6818181818 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109598634198 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336610032272 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353470223315 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078685986768 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343609576238 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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