Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Immigrating to other nations for business purposes has been a popular tendency for many families recently. Therefore, it has been debated that whether this trend would obtain positive influence on offspring of one family who resolves to establish their life due to profession's requirements in another country or not. My essay will analyse both of the perspectives and demonstrate my views at the end of the paragraph.
Altering to a new foreign neighborhood is believed to deal pessimistic effects to a child, and in fact, this is true in some cases. A survey on several teenagers whose parents moved to a completely unfamiliar place just to maintain their financial status when they were younger suffer from many mental sickness like depression, autism, or anxiety disorders. Numerous children who suffer from this case feel lost when they live in the new environment. This is because the ability to adapt to elsewhere new is limited for a child, and therefore, they are unable to communicate, or have new relationships. This consequently directly affects their education, state of mind, and physical development.
However, it does not mean that changing new living surroundings is bad due to certain reasons. Once the children are used to the conditions of their new home, which means that they have already overcome their problems they endured initially. Furthermore, these young individuals virtually become successful in their future carried because the ability to handle pressure tasks is laid a solid foundation already. For instance, in the USA, most children who have already experienced such a change in his life find himself more resilient in making crucial decisions which involve in their career.
In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of switching living places for busy parents are even. In my opinion, it creates the opportunity for their children to harden themselves in terms of patience as they adapt to that unaccustomed place.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sickness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much mental sickness', 'a good deal of mental sickness'.
Suggestion: much mental sickness; a good deal of mental sickness
...atus when they were younger suffer from many mental sickness like depression, autism, or anxiety dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92585724442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8762457426 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114845207722 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397849510255 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342672582294 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740046546726 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357902548304 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sickness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much mental sickness', 'a good deal of mental sickness'.
Suggestion: much mental sickness; a good deal of mental sickness
...atus when they were younger suffer from many mental sickness like depression, autism, or anxiety dis...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92585724442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8762457426 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114845207722 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397849510255 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342672582294 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740046546726 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357902548304 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.