Nowadays many people choose to self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the present world, a majority of people opt for self-employment rather than a 9-5 job in an organization. There is a multitude of reasons why people prefer this, but there are pros and cons for both types of employment.

Firstly, many people believe that self-employment is more satisfying and fulfilling than a job at a company. This is what drives many youngsters to create their own start-ups. When one works for an organization, it could be because he or she is forced into working because of their financial situation, where they have to support their family, even though they do not like their job. Working in a company day in and day out for a decent salary, just because of pressure is not good enough for everyone.

Secondly, when one is self-employed and running their own business, it is because of their passion and they love what they do. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, the CEO of Facebook, Instagram and WhatsApp, if he had been satisfied with a mediocre job, we would not have something called social media today.

Lastly, there are a variegated disadvantages in a business as well. The most important factor that a job can offer but not self-employment is the financial stability. Even though, a business can give a high turnover, there is an equal and very real possibility of losing everything that is invested. The risk factors involved in a business is way higher, and it’s a precarious path to go take. There are many companies that have shut down because of insolvency, such as Jet Airways. Jet Airways was an airline company which provided a cost-effective price on the tickets and most suitable for middle class families to fly domestic.

In conclusion, the mode of employment is contingent upon the person and their interests, whether he or she is satisfied with what they are doing.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disadvantage'?
Suggestion: disadvantage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87781350482 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92890923735 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9606397251 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282992163254 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867889453756 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660644379614 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148098114321 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794216756428 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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