Nowadays in various nations it is believed by peoples that spending larger amount of money for the construction of new railways lines is important for very quake trains to join cities together. while other thinks that more amount of expenditure should be spend for the maintenance and improvement of public transportation. This essay will discuss both points of views and provide opinion before giving a particular conclusion.
In the one hand, it is believed that railways are the more easiest and cheapest transportation. Therefore, it should be managed and constructed in a better order. Railways has made travel easier for people to reach their work or school in time and it can also be cheap for student to travel to their universities.However, it has also made the good development in industry and trade sector by joing the multiple numbers cities together, To illustrate clearly once people use to face lots of difficulties to visit Gandaki to seti due to a very bad railways system and non constructed railway lines but nowadays government has constructed better trains and made the lines convenient, as a result it has made travel easier for the people to travel from Gandaki to Seti.
One the other hand, ralways has also some majou drawbacks, as it can proudce pollution in the air which can be harmfull to the individuals. Moreover if the railways track is near the school or office area than it can cause much noise which can distract people while reading or doing work. Therefore, most of the people i our country believe in public transport as it can be much convinet becouse we cannot find any traffic while travelling also it will be easier for is to travel anywhere.For example, as nepal is a landlock country, it will be very difficult for workers to do work in landed area. Some may losse their life while working in such dangerous place.
To conclude, it is can be beneficial for people if the railway line are made to make the travel easier and for the countries development in infracture sector but it can also be difficult to construct them in a land lock countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'joining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: joining
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...at more amount of expenditure should be spend for the maintenance and improvement of...
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Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86072423398 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82047147092 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49860724234 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.074919612 49.4020404114 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.636363636 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6363636364 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307674501106 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122224233836 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872019524191 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208031152439 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847117088904 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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