The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In the state-of-the-art era, there is not only a great change in technology and science but the lifestyle and the way of thinking of the young generation are also different from people in the past. In any family, there are usually incompatibilities between grandparents or parents and children. While older people suppose that traditional beliefs, as well as ancestor’s moral standards, need maintaining and developing, others think these ideas are too backward to help the youth adapt to space- age society. Personally, I believe that some cultural ideas are outdated but some are helpful and should not be forgotten.
On the one side, our ancestors had passed on to us the thoughts of life, precious lessons, and even strict disciplines in the way we live and treat others. And it cannot be denied that all of these things created our cultural identities. No matter which era we live, we have to train ourselves to gain good dignities such as honesty, courage, perseverance, sense of community and so on as all of them follow us during our life and help us to succeed in all things. These values exist in folk tales, images of heroes in the past which every child should be taught instead of wasting time on harmful video games. By way of illustration, it is recognized that Japan is one of the most developed countries in the world but traditional values and even strict Eastern teachings in daily life are still not faded by advanced technology or globalization. Therefore, it is these moral standards that were deeply ingrained in each Japanese citizen that help them to overcome thousands of challenges up to now to build such a powerful nation.
On the other side, there are many ideas of older people become less relevant for the current generation and even prevent their development. In fact, some unreasonable Eastern feudal prejudices still affect people’s thoughts nowadays although we are living in a world with integration and globalization. For example, in some Eastern countries, discrimination between men and women still exists and prevents women from success in their careers. So that the traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriateness by most younger people. In addition, the thought that children have to obey parents in all things and do not have permission to decide their own future is unacceptable. In this modern life, children completely have chances to step out of their comfort zone and pursue their passion even though their decisions might be wrong.
In conclusion, being global citizens in an advanced society, we should know what we should learn from our previous generations, what we should change to grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...pted as necessary or appropriateness by most younger people. In addition, the thought that c...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ugh their decisions might be wrong. In conclusion, being global citizens in an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07111111111 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90412733115 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5124111178 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.235294118 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4705882353 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255104035357 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736765365046 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580331595055 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146588747615 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734437093148 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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