Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, parents are putting pressure on children to become successful. I believe it is a positive development and will explain the reasons in this essay.
Some parents believe that success can provide their children a brighter future because it can ensure children’s ability to survive independently, without relying on the assistance of parents. Due to their concern for children's independence, parents might put a lot of pressure on them. Parents give advice and even force their own children to follow the paths that they have designated just to be certain of future success. For example, there are some cases of successful children coming from strict families, where their parents force them to follow their own plans or put pressure on them to study and work hard. Through the pressure from parents, they can be able to live independently and thrive in their career when they grow up.
Another reason relating to this development is that parents do not want their children to feel like losers compared to other peers. Success can be a measurement that people use to show their superiority towards others. By becoming successful in life, children will not feel inferior to their peers, therefore feeling more confident in life. Therefore, to prevent children’s disbelief in themselves, some parents might force them to work or study diligently to become more successful than peers. Afterwards, this pressure from parents might actually help children believe in themselves more instead of harming them.
In conclusion, I think that this phenomenon can be beneficial because success can ensure children’s ability to rely on themselves and their confidence in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...uccess can be a measurement that people use to show their superiority towards other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28624535316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77086117912 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8924552509 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364309961172 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15383217481 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921087289341 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229582412626 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986646677535 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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