People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors Do you agree or disagree

One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the most people believing that people's shopping habits depend on their age group other than any other factors. This is a wide spread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not accept entirely and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the shopping nature is not only contribute to increases the economy of the country, but also provide numerous other benefits to various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, but not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits are stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances to prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aforementioned proposition is that, this can only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, only when one follow such system, it can help to broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes such as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why more are in favour of this topic.
In the view of above outlined, one can conclude that the benefits of people's shopping habits may be vary depending on their age is indeed too great to ignore.

Votes
Average: 2.7 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not accept entirely...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
...opping nature is not only contribute to increases the economy of the country, but also pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83266932271 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68538900462 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7096014962 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184144180696 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638341758294 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979189403998 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119870689612 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886032259747 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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