Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
It is an undeniable fact water plays a vital role in human life. Nowadays, one of the main concerns of the human beings is water pollution which can threaten both humans and the environment. In this essay, I will explore some of the issues and negative effects associated with this type of pollution caused by car's emission and dumping wastes.
One of the main causes of water pollution is emissions produced by cars. In other words, these emissions including damaging chemical particles, such as carbon and sulphur dioxide, can contaminate rainwater, run-off and water supplies. For example, it is confirmed by many scientists that the rate of water contamination in urban areas is often far more than other places, such as suburbs or rural areas, as many people in large cities tend to use their private cars, and this can ultimately release a huge amount of emissions into the air. In spite of the fact that air pollution in itself can produce a lot of health-related problems, such as respiratory diseases and eye irritation, it can also cause many water-related diseases like cholera and typhoid affecting people's lives in the long run.
Another obvious cause of water contamination is dumping wastes into the ocean. That is to say, sewage and trashes released into the ocean can lead to marine pollution. Many poor countries, for instance, dump household garbage into the seas as there are not enough landfills, and this can eventually pollute the ocean. Dumping these pollutants can have knock-on effects on sea species such as fish, dolphins and sharks, and therefore, it can threaten the life of these type of animals, leading to the extinction of them. In addition, as many people consume seafood, this contamination can transmit to the human's body and produce serious problems such as poisoning.
To sum up, while human activities are the main cause of water pollution and produce many problems for both humans and the sea environment, these problems are not insurmountable and can easily be addressed. If the governments prohibited sea dumping and imposed stricter laws on the usage of private cars, this problem would be perfectly solved.
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, in spite of, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07584269663 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73477669985 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536516853933 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5951710025 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223271658447 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909777803285 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043897833414 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158326610987 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464537554583 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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