At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are some countries which have young population. It meens the population of young people is more than the population of old people at these countries.
A society with a large number of young people always has a big chance to develop rapidly. The adults often have new ideas to implement a country and they are usually more creative than older people. Furthermore, a young population is able to generate a new generation for a country. It is very important and it can help that the society be happy more. Also, when a country has a large number of young people, elderly are more satisfied. Because these people have much experience and they can give some advice to younger people. So, it will help them to feel that they are still useful and important for the society.
However, a young population need more facilities than older population. Young families often have some children who need good education and facilities to be a useful generation in the future. For example, children need some good kindergartens and schools to learn well and they need some amenities for their freetimes such as parks, cinemas, and zoos. Further, the young people need good jobs. They need to have a good job if they want to earn money and develop the country.
In my opinion, the advantages of having more young people in a society is more than its disadvantages if governments provide some infrastructures for some facilities, education, and career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90688259109 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6950550653 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485829959514 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.119923711 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209966387171 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835110842422 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662885586463 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140231341924 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048145794528 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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