By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Murder has dramatically increased recently, which has many controversial opinions about whether the murders should be punished by death penalty or life in prison. I will discuss both views.
On the one hand, the death penalty will prevent others from murdering and danger. First and foremost, some murderers have tendency to commit crimes again after releasing from prison. It is really dangerous for society in the future as they are able to continue to convict murders, thus, many a person is likely to be killed. Secondly, the cost of imprisonment such as food, clothes, etc coming from annual resident’s tax seems money-consuming for them while capital punishment is better to save expenses for education, healthcare systems and so on. Therefore, life in prison can not pose threat to murderers more than capital punishment
On the other hand, instead of the usage of death penalty, people should put them on prison. First of all, capital punishment is such a violent action that people oppose that living is one of the basic rights of humans, we have no right to take another human life. Thus, putting them on probation is better. Next, death seems to be a light punishment for murders, life in prison makes them undergo the period of time of regret, boredom, fright and tiredness. These metal pains won’t set them free until they die in prison. Consequently, prison is a better option to make murders regret.
In conclusion, personally, in some cases, murderers commit crimes without any previous plans. Although murderers must be punished strictly, I strongly believe that people should take their situations into consideration before judgement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22676579926 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72816361088 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7103273178 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290700203617 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982678141508 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643880883453 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180631841364 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347578893917 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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