Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some believe that reading books is one way of maintaning an active mind, something that movies and programs is televisions can not do so as they are more passive. However, in my opinion, I agree that books keep the mind active but disagree that watching films and televisions does not require imagination.
Books have always been an important tool in enhancing the minds of a lot of people. As a matter of fact, no one has ever graduated from primary school without being able to read a book, thus shows how essential books are in developing the way we think. In addition, the things you learn from reading books keep increasing as you continue to read more even during aging years. That is why a mind full of ideas and knowledge is a mind that does not stop from learning. One of the Philippines' heroes Dr. Jose Rizal is one of the people who believed in exercising the ability of minds to think clearly through book reading.
Watching films and television on the other hand is also an important method of learning. Nowadays, stories from books are later on being made into movies as it just not entertain people but nourish minds as well. One of the most popular and favorite movie series of all time is The Harry Potter which has been watched by billions of people all over the world, irregardless of age. It is thought that as you watch films or TV programs, you tend to imagine and believe on your capabilities. Aside from stories, films also bring more colors to minds. For instance, a lot of educational programs today are being used in schools such as Nat Geo Kids.
In conclusion, the more books are read, the more minds are being developed. Also, by watching films and television, one's imagination continues to widen. Therefore, both plays an important role in honing every one to be a more knowledgeable and critical thinker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...Also, by watching films and television, ones imagination continues to widen. Therefo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249299719888 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.196078431373 0.155533422707 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0616246498599 0.0946595960268 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0672268907563 0.0501214627716 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.03081232493 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134453781513 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.078431372549 0.0403226058552 195% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54473630073 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868347338936 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00280112044818 0.021408717616 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0168067226891 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1846.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 325.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283076923077 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212307692308 0.28420135186 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156923076923 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104615384615 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54473630073 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 60.5408824572 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3125 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5302743075 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 41.5432692308 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.57142857143 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237197085635 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.082355661592 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0725115882164 0.0668466124924 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495711031603 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135864310145 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104761661268 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818978748634 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335574897682 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734464605008 0.0638462369009 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179884545771 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604008265757 0.058150111329 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.