In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
During recent years there has been a significant change in the family structure and roles played by members of the family. While some people believe that such change has disadvantages. I argue that this change is beneficial.
Firstly, starting with the advantages, with advancement of time there has been a fundamental change in the way families are structured, as people are moving away from home or prefer to stay in a nuclear family rather than joint family. This is majorly because, living in joint family would mean bread winner has to bear the responsibilities of the whole family which is becoming strenuous, as one of the reasons for it is that prices for basic necessities are sky rocketing. Moreover, there is a swap between the roles and responsibilities. Such as women nowadays are working, earning and have a crucial role in. In contrast, to the times when women's opinions were curtailed ad men played a predominant role in decision making. For instance, in the olden days, if the there was a decision to make on whether a girl should get married or pursue studies then it was the father's decision which acted as the deciding factor of the fate of his daughter.
Looking at the drawbacks, one of the obvious amongst them is that the relationships are becoming tenuous. This is with regards to the fact that people are spending less time with their family members especially geriatrics. This could make people sad and lonely in long run. Furthermore, the shift in roles is not helpful in cases when a major decision has to be made and the person making the decision is unbeknownst of the factors that could affect other members of the family.
In conclusion, although there are certain drawbacks of the change in roles and structure of families. I concur that positives outweigh the negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... roles played by members of the family. While some people believe that such change ha...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...f the reasons for it is that prices for basic necessities are sky rocketing. Moreover, there is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834220909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5732698165 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213318827262 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732119369813 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721711406841 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153660054963 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880826481695 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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