In recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and solution.
Undoubtedly, it is a highly debatable issue that the crime have became headache of cities of many country. Most of them has been done by generally youngsters according to statistics. I intend to discuss reasons and appropriate solution for this phenomenon.
The crimes have been increased nowadays tremendously in major part if this global cosmos. That represent some arguments as under. First and foremost, youngsters are consider as an upcoming future of the society. They can learn anything rapidly in which they have interest. Owing to that they are influenced by media such as tv, movies, news, so on. Secondly, some youths do crimes just because of fulfilled their basic needs like shelter, food , clothes. As a result they willing to do some crime for their own purpose. Finally, lack of education is also major factor that is not forgotten by us. They do not have plenty of civilian knowledge so this would draw their attention towards the crime.
On the other side of the river bank, this consequences also have some handsome solutions. To initiate with, self awareness should be provide to them by society for better prospective and to be a better person. What is more, government should provide some primary wages job for these kind of special people. Lastly, media should telecast those news and program which leads to positive change in entire world.
To sum up, it is proved beyond the imagination that "we are what we eat" similarly young person see and learn from that so it is them as well as our responsibility to do some better way process to make crime stop bottomry.
Comments
Is this final score that i
Is this final score that i can consider as it is examined in original IELTS test.
Yes, It is very close to the
Yes, It is very close to the score in the actual IELTS exam. The main purpose to practices in testbig site is to find out flaws and get improved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...hly debatable issue that the crime have became headache of cities of many country. Mos...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'many countries'.
Suggestion: many countries
...crime have became headache of cities of many country. Most of them has been done by generall...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...der. First and foremost, youngsters are consider as an upcoming future of the society. T...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...led their basic needs like shelter, food , clothes. As a result they willing to do...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... On the other side of the river bank, this consequences also have some handsome so...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
Suggestion: provided
...initiate with, self awareness should be provide to them by society for better prospecti...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ould provide some primary wages job for these kind of special people. Lastly, media should...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...l people. Lastly, media should telecast those news and program which leads to positive cha...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat' similarly young person see and learn from that so it is them as well as...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'well', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to sum up', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224755700326 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.153094462541 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0814332247557 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0618892508143 0.0501214627716 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0651465798046 0.0437548338989 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130293159609 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0293159609121 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60389565839 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358306188925 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.0814332247557 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162866449511 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162866449511 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1604.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91881918819 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346863468635 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250922509225 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184501845018 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118081180812 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60389565839 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 70.9222425951 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9411764706 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.88348081 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.0334273931 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.37209302326 1.69124875643 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240676037493 0.332605444948 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0586458612492 0.102741220458 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0521510927072 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433181354396 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169029802696 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839972864895 0.134430193775 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609649638474 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.209804213632 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0169764986943 0.0638462369009 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152118995293 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635492281713 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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