In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
Over the past few decades, the fabric of families has considerably altered. As a result, some changes about the function and organization would obviously stem from this phenomenon, which exerts several positive outcomes.
Families have undergone two main alterations regarding the size and the role of the elder. First, the structure of a family tends to experience a decrease in the number of family members. In particular, nuclear families have superseded extended families and currently become the most common type of household. This is because the young couples opt for independence and privacy, meaning that they can have more space and do not have to worry about the presence of their siblings. Second, the words of the old members are now less dictatorial and rather be advice for their children. For example, years ago, parents were the ones who decided the marriage and career for their offspring, while these days, young generations are able to retain control of their life.
From my perspective, the above-mentioned changes are of advantage for the contemporary citizens. Having the freedom from other family members, newly-wed couples can relieve the financial burden of raising other relatives, allowing them to devote all their income to their kids’ development since formative years. Furthermore, a child in a nuclear family would have more space to enjoy both indoors and outdoor activities, which enables him to fully grow and broaden his knowledge. Looking at another angle, if the young’s options are not restricted by their parents, they can at liberty to determine their future and enter into the marriage with their beloved ones. To be more specific, youngsters can pursue their dream jobs instead of following their fathers’ careers which are out of their interest.
In conclusion, I believe that the changes are relevant to the family capacity and the importance of the elderly’s words.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35947712418 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81820637188 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8281835462 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143385717697 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547705286305 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308209410929 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957559408008 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171259070475 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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