Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As poverty is increasing rapidly in countries and everyone is affected by inflation, Yes, therefore, the developed countries should give opportunities rather than giving aid to countries that are in crises.
Firstly, due to the Corona virus, everything was affected, and many underdeveloped countries came into crises as the world was facing it and all the things were closed and properly shutdown. As many industries were closed at that time and got defaulted, they were asking for loans from the developed countries. Developed countries have been giving loans since pandemic time, but this cannot help underdeveloped countries reduce poverty. While poverty is increasing rapidly, many institutions were also closed due to the pandemic, which increased the illiteracy rate. Education is the main key that can help reduce poverty.
Moreover, developed countries rather than giving aid to poor countries, also do some other things to reduce poverty. They should have to establish different types of industries as well as educational institutions. So the people would get opportunities due to industries, and they would earn money. While education also plays an important role in increasing the literacy rate of the country, which reduces the poverty rate to a high extent. Also, developed countries would trade with underdeveloped countries, and because of this many countries would invest here.
To conclude, despite providing aid to poor countries, developed countries should help in other ways, like by providing job opportunities, establishing industries, and providing good education.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65560165975 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05966449228 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.229902612 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37171545204 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147007762151 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147290525679 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266204559304 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120432746136 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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