Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many countries in the world with different categories such as advance country and flourish country sometimes the country with the high amount will be donating some money to another countries. However, nothing guarantee to decrease level of people with lower income and because of that needed another why to push that rate. I completely disagree with this opinion that declared for given another alternative to mitigating poverty of people.
Firstly, for helping the lower countriest should be giving a lot of money and be sure that financial donated to who need it. Every countries is have different expenditure for supporting activities of goverment. Moreover, one of the most function it is to alleviating amount of poverty society, despite nowdays many department misuse their authority. For example, looking for budget of country those give to all region in that country has a significant comparison that giving to inhabitants in it rural. That's why required honesty from employer about the financial because money will be encourage unployment rate.
Secondly, money has some important role to guarante of livability all people. Even the goverment often giving another aid to majority of people that is can't to survive their life for a long time. Whereas, money can making what people needed come true, but officer must be provide a lot of things that can give much effect for live of someone. For instance, one of the purpose from the state officials is channeling wide range aid which is like rice, oil, sauce, noodle, egg and another think, but in fact it things just can able for a short time because if that items was sold they are must buying something for their live and for buy it must have money. Thus, the goverment shold have a effective way to decrease poorest percentage through giving money or creating a lot of work field.
In conclusion, activities in country must be balance among financial and all things what the people needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... that financial donated to who need it. Every countries is have different expenditure...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...donated to who need it. Every countries is have different expenditure for supporti...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ated to who need it. Every countries is have different expenditure for supporting ac...
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Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...that giving to inhabitants in it rural. Thats why required honesty from employer abou...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needed come" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'come' or 'to be come'.
Suggestion: come; to be come
...as, money can making what people needed come true, but officer must be provide a lot...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e money. Thus, the goverment shold have a effective way to decrease poorest perce...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'decrease the poorest'.
Suggestion: decrease the poorest
...goverment shold have a effective way to decrease poorest percentage through giving money or crea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01230769231 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54557697393 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.138600872 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247345280362 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903451682656 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798104262629 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16596655934 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554922364312 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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