In many schools and universities, the favourite subjects of males is science while females often choose arts and literature. There are some reasons for this tendency and I believe that students should change this trend.
One of the most important causes that affects choices of students is interesting. Hobby of boys is usually discovering the new things and they have a good analytical ability. Therefore, they tend to study science like Physics, Maths, Chemistry and so on. Meanwhile, personality of girls is more careful and patient so they interest subjects requiring meticulousness such as arts and literature. On other hand, career orientation influences to choices of students. For example, the favourite jobs of male are technology, construction and engineer which require candidate study science major. However, females must spend more time on taking care their family so they often choose simple job like human resources, medical care, education…
In my view, it is necessary to student have freedom to choose favourite subjects without depending on gender. Many elements are considered to decide what study and what work such as hobby, character and interest. The fact that there are many successful female sciences like Marie Curie, Barbara McClintock. Besides, when people have to do things that they do not like, they will always feel tired.
In conclusion, although girls often study literature and boys usually want to learn science subjects, students should participate subjects that they love because it affect to their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...pate subjects that they love because it affect to their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4173553719 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71760432493 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4357344906 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234155356069 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795509444166 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100192885527 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167293698666 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146261653189 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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