Nowadays, the development of artificial intelligent is put in the spotlight of debating. Some people believe that these smart systems helps with developing the society as well as the economy while other see it with potential unwanted effects. From my perspective, this development is a double-ended blade to the human evolution.
While looking in the bright side of the computer intelligent, there is several desired impacts. Firstly, for the human resource demand for some specifics jobs, the computer system will fill in the needs easily. For example, the working line in the factory which required the consistency, automated technical system will replace the hand-working force with less budget and more efficiency. The second point is that integrating the smart computer process in the supermarket or the train ticketing as well as other public services ease the wait of people, especially in rush hours. Last but not least, since the intelligent will replaced the human processing in some stages of work, it leaves people with time and opportunity to enjoy the life and take care of their beloved ones.
However, there is still many negative effluence that can not be overlooked in this computer revolution. As in a human evolving perspective, computer will reduce the need of people labor forces, as a result, many people will lose their jobs and become unemployed. While looking in the sociality side, public services with artificial intelligent will become less flexible for people because the processing is now decided in algorithms. In some circumstance, while working with people such as the security and compliance field the lack of humane in computer decision won't be as sufficient as the people's directed ideals.
Inconclusion, there is many advantages in the development of computer intelligent. However, the evolution of it will need to be controlled as there are still lots of the harmful aspect to human's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many advantages'?
Suggestion: there are many advantages
...oples directed ideals. Inconclusion, there is many advantages in the development of computer intellig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, still, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27184466019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85304770954 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3205488238 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311066264707 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104872911699 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382828507769 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187013530652 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487684112827 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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