Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
In today’s world of stress and anxiety, many people try to engage in negative activities despite the scientific proven results that these actions can cause a serious degradation to one’s health. Obdurately, many individuals refrain to commit these activities. This essay will try to address certain reasons which promotes unhealthy actions and consequently the solutions will be provided.
Firstly, modern life has become so arduous and the work-life balance is being jeopardized since many years. Due to this, majority of people suffer from mental stress and anxiety, eventually making them prone to commit unhealthy activities. Moreover, person’s peers can contribute significantly to undertake these activities because no one prefers to feel being left out when a group is doing unhealthy activities. Thus, inevitably, a person will frequently get in touch with these activities to join the fraternity. Finally, many people after frequent exposure cannot resist conducting these activities and develop an addiction for it. For example, chronic smokers tend to smoke at least 2 times a day, if they don’t, they cannot remain calm and stable.
However, the pervasive nature of bad activities can be brought under controlled by imposing certain restrictions. To begin with, government should adopt other alternatives which can provide a similar experience to the individuals addicted to it. For instance, many alternatives of smoking such as Chewing Gums to reduce smoking, are available in the market, which supplants the Nicotin responsible for its detrimental effect on human body with a similar composition which is not harmful. Another possible solution should focus on improving mental health in a healthier way. Government should grant counselling sessions and make them easily accessible to public. With this, people can share their difficulties and the counselor will reduce the stress the individuals face.
To summarize, despite of the certain reasons which are inevitable for an individual aforementioned, people should encourage the possible steps to make people more health conscious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64150943396 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9134231571 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.752094923 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208643157715 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632416700523 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427053549096 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130280050219 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127700529008 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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