Nowadays, the number of big multinational companies are increasing and as a result the number of small businesses is declining. I believe that this has more benefits than drawbacks.
First of all, the disadvantage of this development is the problem of traffic congestion these big companies causes. To be more precise, compared to the small companies, the big companies requires a lot space to establish their buildings and headquarters and when they build this in inner city or suburban areas, it will cause great traffic problems. Thr huawei headquarters in China is an example for this, surveys have shown that traffic congestion has increased fivefold due to the establishment of this building in inner Hong Kong.
Despite this, there are significant advantages too. Firstly, the main benefit is that it will increase job opportunities for people. Nowadays the number of unemployed people are increasing day-by-day, this is due to lack of jobs. However, this issue can be reduced with with the arrival of more companies, because these companies needs a lot of employees.
In addition to this, another benefit is that, it draws up the union among nations. Because if a multinational enterprise want to export or provide services for other nations, it must get the consent of the these counties, which means that they will have a good relationship with each other. For instance, the company apple has a good friendship with all nations, this is due to the quality services they provide to all nations.
In conclusion, although this development has some disadvantages, I believe that they are outweighed by the advantages. Because it increases the employment rate and union among countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96508533534 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.677086283 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221685952691 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777807501737 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053310506799 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122944706859 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473634001338 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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