Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is injurious to health. Smoking harms the smokers but also people in the surroundings. The cigarettes contains the nicodin as well as tar that is harmful for living beings. It is the cause of various diseases such as asthma, cancer, respiration problems, heart problems and so on. Thus, I believe that smoking should be band in various place including public places where there are all kinds of people.
Firstly, Smoking is a trend in today world. People are more inspired by there family member in home, who smokes inside their house. Smoking brings out numbers of diseases in human beings. Smoking is creating various types of problem in family as well as in community. For example people are smoking in there house small kids learn from there elders thus, young people may learn to smoke from there family members. I was small when my father used to smoke inside home and i used to go and buy it because my father used to send me to the shop. One day I wanted to taste and I smoke. As a result i started to smoke. Similarly not only me my friend who lived inside the same society.
Secondly, It should not banded because it is bringing out various diseases and creating a family unhappy. The chain smoker in the family bring out various diseases. Thus, for the check up with doctors and visiting hospital huge amount of money is required with will affect the living standard of the family. For example many students in India are facing similar problems because the money that is for the school fee used in the medical and they can't study. Therefore i think people should be conscious about this and they should stop smoking.
To sum up, I think smoking in should be banded not only in public places but also in the home and other area. If this thing is not banded many consequence will arise in future. So I believe government and nation both should be conscious about this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
...ple in the surroundings. The cigarettes contains the nicodin as well as tar that is harm...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banded'?
Suggestion: banded
... Thus, I believe that smoking should be band in various place including public place...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my father used to smoke inside home and i used to go and buy it because my father...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... One day I wanted to taste and I smoke. As a result i started to smoke. Similarly ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...anted to taste and I smoke. As a result i started to smoke. Similarly not only me...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... smoke. As a result i started to smoke. Similarly not only me my friend who lived inside ...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'band'
Suggestion: band
...me society. Secondly, It should not banded because it is bringing out various dise...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...school fee used in the medical and they cant study. Therefore i think people should ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...sed in the medical and they cant study. Therefore i think people should be conscious abou...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... medical and they cant study. Therefore i think people should be conscious about ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es but also in the home and other area. If this thing is not banded many consequen...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consequence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many consequences'.
Suggestion: many consequences
...other area. If this thing is not banded many consequence will arise in future. So I believe gove...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... not banded many consequence will arise in future. So I believe government and nation bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62426035503 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24915321219 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7558583306 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0454545455 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13636363636 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246410756866 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850937237918 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707508961194 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157722624444 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605400021587 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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