In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
It is true that adults worldwide nowadays tend to postpone their parenthood until late in their life. There are some reasons which can be put forward to explain this trend, and there are significant impacts on both society and family life.
There are two obvious reasons why people choose to delay their time to have children. Firstly, the costs of living are noticeably increasing. Young adults, who are just new to their jobs, usually struggle to earn enough for their living. This, therefore, is one of the contributing factors for the choice of having babies late because parents need an amount of money to nurture their offsprings. Secondly, workplace commitment also hinders the parenthood. As being new to the jobs, young adults need to strive to impress their employers and get promotion, which leads to such little time that they cannot spend with their children.
The consequences for family life and society will be negatively inevitable if this trend is till going on. From the perspective of family, daily life seems to be monotonous if it lacks naive laughter from the children. Furthermore, women are advised not to give birth late so that they can avoid some health issues later and the babies can grow up better. In terms of the society, late birth giving cannot deal with the recent population aging. For instance, the Japanese authorities have taken many measures to increase the birth rate as they are facing a serious problem that the young tend not to give birth due to their busy life schedule.
All in all, some reasons can be identified for the decline of birth rate among young adults, and the serious impacts on family life and society must not be underestimated. Therefore, measures need taking to minimize the negative consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98310810811 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52556098173 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7184061292 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247047425965 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811033474801 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689558016898 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165314484457 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506694316205 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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