In a few nations, there is an escalation in the average weight of masses and the fall in health and fitness level. Further, this essay will delve into the causes and solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, fast-food seems to be the foremost cause of this issue because people are likely to eat this food instead of homemade food in their daily routine, and most of the fast-food items that contain excessive sugar and fat increase the weight of the body. To cite an example, the Indian ministry of health and family welfare, which surveyed in the year 2015, clearly represented that 80 % of people suffer from health problems due to junk food. To cite an example, the Indian ministry of health and family welfare which surveyed in the year 2015, clearly represented that almost 80 % of people suffer from health problems due to junk food. Secondly, the sedentary lifestyle may have a link with this problem because some people who have no time for exercises can be doctors, engineers, teachers, and others. Finally,
The first and foremost solution is people should avoid the fast food, which contains high cholesterol ingredients, is likely to create different health problems; hence, they must add the green vegetables and fruits in their daily diet to fulfil the value of high nutritious vitamins and minerals. Besides, people have to adopt the habit of doing the exercises to burn their calories, which can be helpful to make them fit and active.
In conclusion, though increasing weight is not a big issue in this busy world, yet people should be aware of their health; consequently, they should manage their diet and exercise properly for tackling this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the year 2015, clearly represented that 80 % of people suffer from health proble...
^^
Line 2, column 777, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve no time for exercises can be doctors, engineers, teachers, and others. Finally...
^^
Line 2, column 820, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngineers, teachers, and others. Finally, The first and foremost solution is peopl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98220640569 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4818284765 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8230259349 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.555555556 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239710204061 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106472674288 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516663317893 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151259446829 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186402886955 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.