In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness
are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be
taken to solve them?
In many nations around the world, declining health and a lack of fitness are becoming very
common among people. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be
taken to alleviate this problem.
There are several causes of this situation. The main one is that technological advancements
have resulted in a sedentary lifestyle. Because of the prevalent use of computers and vehicles,
it is no longer necessary to move around much. This leads to people becoming overweight,
which also adversely affects their health and fitness. In addition, people are consuming more
unhealthy processed food nowadays. For example, fast food, junk food and processed canned
food have become extremely popular due to people’s chronic busyness. Such food results in a
lot of health problems if it is consumed in large quantities.
Various possible courses of action could be taken in order to tackle the above. In the first
place, the government could launch a nationwide campaign to raise awareness about the
importance of eating healthily and exercising. For instance, advertisements by the ministry of
health about the dangers of eating junk food and not exercising should be regularly shown on
television and the internet. Another way forward could be for schools to prohibit unhealthy
food from being sold in schools. If schools start to ban too much fried food or food that is
high in sugar and salt, students will be forced to eat a more balanced and healthy diet at
school. The result is that health would improve dramatically.
In conclusion, various factors have led to problems related to health and fitness, but this
situation could be addressed by the launch of a health and fitness campaign and the
implementation of effective regulations to limit the sale of unhealthy food in schools. Given
this situation, it is recommended that steps should be taken immediately in order to ensure
that the health and fitness of the people in the country improves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1975308642 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77709182203 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6257926158 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195518938651 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067501995241 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542268415212 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644174696723 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568675154877 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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