Nowadays, one of the most warning issues is a rapid increase in the average weight of residents around the world whereas there is a considerable decline in the levels of wellness. There are a number of explanations as well as some visible solutions for this problem which will be discussed below.
It seems to me that there are 2 main reasons why the worldwide average weight is surging while the fitness rate is decreasing. Firstly, unhealthy lifestyles play an extremely important role in raising the issues. Numerous people around the world commit to sedentary lifestyles, in other words, they choose to spend most of their time watching TV or flicking through posts on Facebook instead of working out. Some individuals are unaware of their health condition or do not take it into account and end up sleeping, sitting, and eating unmanageably all day long. These are basic signs of inactive lifestyles. Secondly, the rampant appearance of the fast-food industry and its advertisements also exaggerate the situation. Fast foods or junk foods are detrimental to well-being, especially contributing to serious obesity as they contain plenty of toxins coming from overuse oil or contaminated ingredients. A large quantity of advertisements for junk foods bombarding our eyes every day also encourages people to consume this insalubrious kind of food, which gradually raises the obese population.
Several actions should be taken to mitigate the development of this trend. The first one is for educational institutions and every organization to indicate to their members about the terrible impacts of being overweight as well as the urgent need of improving their health conditions. Another solution is for governments to consider the damaging influence of fast food advertising and therefore implement some drastic restrictions on these ads. At the same time, the governments should enforce some regulations on the quality of food and the sanity food processing, and radically ban any violations.
In conclusion, from a personal viewpoint, there are 2 possible explanations for the increasing obesity in many countries. Consequently, schools, organizations, and government should share hands in order to tackle this warning issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07449644744 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623563218391 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7782955531 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146292574082 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423621157836 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376169535553 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881643066861 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353210936099 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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