In multiple developed countries, obesity is a prudent phenomenon that result in decling health of citizens. Due to the concerning of physical fitness, obesity is becoming a thorny problem that urgently requires solution. This essay will discuss the cause of obesity and come up with possible solution.
Generally, the factors result in obesity include the abundant supply of food and the insufficency of exercise. People of developed countries own effortless access to plenty of food when compared to people in developing countries. Therefore, residents of developed countries easily over consume food and beverage. Another reason is that some people lack frequent exercise which exacerbates health condition. A statistic revealed that 60% of Australians are over-weitht.
However, measures can be taken to alleviate the circumstance and keeing a health lifestyle is the best solution. In order to achieve the goal of keeping fitness, keeping a balanced diet and regularly participating in sport is the two requisite routines. Keeping a balanced diet guarantees dieter a healthy body and never gain weight. Regular exercise renders a healthier lifesyle for both work and life. People who participate in sports regularly and conform to a low-fat diet look younger that people of the same age but lead a unhealthy life.
To recapitulate, the unhealthy lifestyle of developed countries causes the problem of obesity among citizens. One prominant result of obesity is the deteriorating of people's health. Nevertheless, living a healthy lifestyle is the only solution to the obesity problem. By keeping a balanced diet and exercising regularly, people still can enjoy a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51737451737 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97514336862 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8698741113 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150293731787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487956502484 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435181953396 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880491834797 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269195188113 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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