In some countries, celebrities earn higher salaries than senior politicians. What are the reasons? Is it a negative or positive development?
It is true that famous people earn much more money than some of the politicians in some countries.This is because,people are more interested in celebrities than politicians and famous people’s business are much more private than politicians.As for me this is positive development,since becoming celebrities needs much more skills and privileges.In this essay ı will support my views with valid arguments and examples.
As for the reasons,primarily,people dont have any interest in politicians lifes or business.For this reasons sometimes they dont have any knowledge even politicians names.But residents are always eager to know famous people’s life,names or business.Thats why celebrities can easily make much more money with the help of the this curious.For instance,when one adversiment company organise one concert they always are looking for celebrities for their concerts rather than politicians,because they know that ın this way they might catch the attention of people.So fortunately, celebrities easily get more money than politicians with the help of the these types of concerts or organisations.Besides,politicians salaries depend on governments.For this reasons they dont have any ability to increase their budgets themselves.But when ıt comes to the celebrities they are working independently.So they might decide their salaries and they go up their budgets whenever they want.For instance,when celebtiries think that they need much more money for one month they have a chance to accept much more concerts or organisations than they do.In this way lucklıy,their budgets can incline steadily,But unfourtunately,politicians dont have chance like this .They need to wait governments decisions to increase their salaries.
When ıt comes to the developments,above all,people should much more effort for becoming celebrity rather than senior politician.Because you need to have special features or skills to become celebrity.For instance,you should have speacial voices for becoming singer or you should have perfect gentures for becoming dancer.But unfortunately,you can easily become politician with your education backround.You dont need to have a privilege.Besides,celebrities work harder than politicians for ımproving their innates skills.This is because they might easily loose their features when they leave it working hard.But unfortunately,politicians dont have these worries ,since they will continue their career without spending much more time and effort.
In conclusıon,people are willing to see celebrities than politicians in their lifes.This situation sitimulates celebrities for earning much more money than senior politicians.Also becoming famous is not short process.Although you have born with some special features you should work hard to improve them.Hovewer this situations is not true for the politicians.Fot this reasons celebrities deserve much more salaries than senior politicians.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, as for, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07451923077 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.16615805266 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466346153846 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 20.2975951904 512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 362.686762234 49.4020404114 734% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 631.75 106.682146367 592% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.0 20.7667163134 501% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 72.0 5.01903807615 1435% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179693659126 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152097342408 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624950367814 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152097342408 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624950367814 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 59.2 13.0946893788 452% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -59.46 50.2224549098 -118% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 24.5 7.44779559118 329% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.4 11.3001002004 419% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.11 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.59 8.58950901804 147% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.78957915832 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 10.1190380762 431% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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