in some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in the other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.to what extent should children have to follow rules.
Offsprings are considered as the piece of clay; they can be moulded in any direction. So, it become essential for them to follow some rules, that can make them a responsible citizen when they grow up as adults. I totally agree with the fact of fixing some behaviour rules for children. In this essay, i will explore the same with some examples and assertions, and will shape up opinion at the end.
To begin with, no doubt childhood is golden span of human life; but it is the crucial stage in which one can make the child a good personality or can spoil the kids by excessive pampering. Hence, following rules at early stage of life can help to develop a good quality among children. This behaviour rules can help the kids to know how to Conversate with society people, that is, how to talk and behave with people; their elders, their teachers, their relatives and their family members.
Moreover, a good socialized the society is made buy it's a socialised people; and the children are foundation of future. A sense of following the rules will make them a good citizen as well as a good human being. A survey was conducted by human "Hindustan Times" which proved that, implementing rules of behaviour among children results in 60% reduction in social crimes and misbehavings.
At a glance, it can be said that; rules for behaviour management of child must be there, but not too strict rules needed to be implemented that the innocence of childhood gets lost somewhere. Rules must be such that it does not appears to be the burden for kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you mean 'appear'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: appear
...re. Rules must be such that it does not appears to be the burden for kids.
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63696578211 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542124542125 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6112731749 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14826213585 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622639237701 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430533315864 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910677220098 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414540246098 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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