In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In some parts of the world, higher authorities are making arrangements to support industrialists in moving their businesses out of urban areas. With this in mind, authorities seek to determine that moving the industries from big cities carry more advantage than the negatives. Although there are some points to support the negatives, positives such as environment-friendly atmosphere and free from high crowded traffic make us seem to believe that these carry more weight.
Firstly, there are some negatives associated with the discussion, but these negatives do not outweigh positives. As a starting point, moving business from a big city which requires a huge investment that would be expensive and time-consuming. For instance, a new plant construction requires millions of dollars which can be considered a difficult task for small businesses and result in getting bankrupt. Another reason to support this point, the employee working in industries have to move their families to rural areas. Some people like to stay in big cities just because of facilities provide are immense, and due to this reason, some people would end up quitting their jobs. By considering the above argument one might think that negatives carry more weight, but once we look at the positives consequences, we will see that the belief is unfound.
Now, when it comes to the positive side of the discussion they carry more weight than negatives attributes. To start with, urban areas are getting badly affected due to industries eliminating toxic gases in the environment which results in various types of diseases being common in most of the population. For example, the research found that people living in rural areas live more than the people who like to stay in a big city. More evidence suggests that moving industries to underdeveloped areas would minimize the horrific traffic conditions in cities. During most job times, there is a huge load on traffic, and one of the reasons might be due to these big industries located in the countryside. By cutting of traffic load, people will get relief from immense traffic.
In conclusion, relocating industries from urban to rural areas carry more weight because due to less population in those areas the damage to people's health can be minimized. Therefore, health is more important than any industry for the betterment of civilization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22251308901 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89240007268 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531413612565 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6836493761 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214254065943 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736813827502 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570269377994 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134833553183 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457333946334 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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