In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their
parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in some countries, more and more people of adulthood are still living with their
parents, even after completing education and finding a job. While most people do not support
that, personally, I believe that this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks.
The first benefit is the cost saving problem. Fresh graduates and new job seekers often do not
have a stable source of income. On this account, adults usually find difficulties in finance
when they have to pay for their own living expenses. Therefore, living with parents helps to
ease the burden of living expenses.
Second, adults will have a chance of spending more time with their family and vice versa.
Living close together allows family members conveniently to take care of each other. Since
adolescents are not mature enough as well as do not have much real life experience, they can
be highly susceptible. Living close to their parents paves the way for sharing, intervention,
encouragement when any problems abruptly arise.
On second thought, relying too much on the care and provision of parents can easily lead
young adults to become overly dependent. They are not aware of being financially active and
consequently, spending as much as they want because all the expenses their parents have
helped pay for. Be that as it may, it is not a significant problem if adults can learn how to
assert their independence and self-sufficiency while still living with their parents. It should be
that the matter itself is not the problem, the problem lies in the way we perceive and react to
it.
To sum up, in spite of some obvious disadvantages, the practice of keeping to live with
parents, even after graduating and finding employment, has more benefits to offer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10689655172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68631313145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6733326924 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395578857669 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122685465431 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10139195256 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105672506023 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801816217091 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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