In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

What are the reasons for this?

How can people research this?

It is true that a large number of people from distinct countries start their adventure of making sense of the ancient stories of the architectures they live in. A variety of factors may lead to this new trend and the main reason might be the increasing importance awarness of culture and history.

First of all, with the development of economy society, people have more free time than the past so they are able to develop interests besides the work. Scondly, culture and history become a hot topic in recent years and the public start to pay more attention to them. For example, there are various historical TV shows in China which aim at expanding the influence of Chinese culture around the world. Finally, social media plays an important role in this new fashion, people all over the world share the histories of their houses on the social media, such as youtube, tiktok, and reddit, which will encourage others to find out if there are some special stories of their own houses.

The methods to discover ancient stories about architectures are various as well. To start with, individuals can ask the elders for some help, some unwritten stories may be inherited by oral description. For instance, there is a temple located next to my house, my grandmother told me that the temple was built to prey for peace during the war time in Qing dynasty, which is never recorded in any books.Then, internet is another powerful tool to get more information, people can gather related data using the searching engine like google, or they can join some forums for more details and get contract with people who study in local history.

In conclusion, finding out history has became a new trend and more people join in it because they are desire to learn about local culture that included in architectures.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83818770227 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47940374824 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7595108248 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.5 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370738211406 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117273674476 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625909179326 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205894904628 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353807117075 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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