In some countries owning a home rather than rent one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
It is no doubt that owning a house is a consequential matter in modern society. It is opinion of this writer that having a own resident instead of renting is a positive situation.
On the issue of having a house, a key factor is that people can desire and decorate their houses. It is vital to understand that owning a house creates a situation in which people can construct more rooms and also can arrange the location of furniture and others decoration. This situation generates an outcome whereby people who prefer to plan their house feel happy when they live in their house. There are further effect in the form of nailing, which you can put nails into the wall for decorating or placing a clock without anyone's permission.
Another important element in owning a house is not to paying a rent. As a consequence of the fact that if you have a house, you will not have to pay for rent every months. It is similarly true that people who have their own houses can spend more money on other factors of their life. In this regards, 7-Eleven stores are a prominent example showing that owning of the building for making stores can rise the income and spend it on others things instead of paying a lent.
The writer takes the view that it is a positive situation in which owning a house. It should be abundantly clear that owning a house create many positive situation such as you can manage your finance without the payoff a rent and also you can arrange your house due to your desire. In this content, one can see why owners of the house are happy and have a better life then someone who rent a house. Thus a plan for action should include a sum of money of people which will able to effort for buying a house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t is opinion of this writer that having a own resident instead of renting is a po...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...oney on other factors of their life. In this regards, 7-Eleven stores are a prominen...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ter life then someone who rent a house. Thus a plan for action should include a sum ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, then, thus, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42405063291 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31256806999 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477848101266 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3890200178 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184457185656 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763845407948 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392431413282 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126696833359 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289054447909 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.