In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, ownership is an important matter. owning a house rather than renting a home matter people's status in some countries.
This is an important case because people's status always matters in society. And also the nature of humans from ancient times to show off by saying its mine own property set another level od status. Human habit always wants their own house, car, and other property as per the financial status. Even though they can afford small but human always want their own property. it shows their status in society and they can also have the same level of respect and position in society.
Another case is freedom of their own lives. If people have their own house then they can have their own freedom rather then in rent. They can have their own design room, amenities, own favorite paint in the wall and also they can have enough space to live. They can have their privacy also. But in renting people have to stay as per the landlord agreement. They cannot have enough space to live, they cannot paint the wall as per their design, it is hard to find the room as they wanting, so need to compromise. People have to shift their rooms as landlord desires. So, I think there is no freedom.
People who own their house can have parties, invite friends as their desire and moods and can enjoy. But in renting people cannot do that. They cannot invite friends as they want. People have to stay in a limited number
whereas, there is a negative point also of owning a house. They have to pay more loans, there can be always tension if some natural disaster comes then that can destroy, repairing the house. People always must have a good job to earn more money because to pay a mortgage loan to make the same level of status in society. But all this tension will not be in the rental house. you just need to pay rent and stay peacefully. While renting people always search the house as they can afford. So, there will not be any tension like being a landlord.
In conclusion, though owning a home has some stress and tension but also people prefer to own a house as they can say that this is my property. This give the next level of satisfaction to the people by human nature. People always want to earn more own properties and make some status in society. For the people's nature of satisfaction on owning their own property and high level of status on family and society, it is important owning a house rather than renting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Owning
...ries, ownership is an important matter. owning a house rather than renting a home matt...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rom ancient times to show off by saying its mine own property set another level od ...
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Suggestion: It
...t human always want their own property. it shows their status in society and they ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her case is freedom of their own lives. If people have their own house then they c...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... they can have their own freedom rather then in rent. They can have their own design...
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Suggestion: as well
...ce to live. They can have their privacy also. But in renting people have to stay as ...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...ple have to stay in a limited number whereas, there is a negative point also of owni...
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...ple have to stay in a limited number whereas, there is a negative point also of owni...
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Suggestion: You
...ension will not be in the rental house. you just need to pay rent and stay peaceful...
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Line 11, column 305, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...nd make some status in society. For the peoples nature of satisfaction on owning their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53828828829 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12290157638 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405405405405 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.576018866 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4827586207 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3103448276 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1724137931 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228441979532 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834902072464 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660639555002 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151353984719 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712197324271 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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